I'm really enjoying this story. I like the girls and want to know more about each of them but I really wish there was more Lucy. She was so sweet and the interactions with her were cute in the beginning but I feel like she's been pushed out by all the others in the harem. It's hard to write content for so many but I feel like she needs more time with the MC so that she's "seen" like she was in the beginning.
I do agree that I feel as though furthering Lucy's story would be nice. To be honest, I was expecting some form of a follow-up 'retaliation' from her mother, to be honest. I mean, the cafe is really close to where she lives so there is no way her mother doesn't know where she is currently staying.
The challenge, I imagine, would be maintaining good pacing. Especially considering we are in the middle of establishing the dynamic between the MC and the other Founding Family heads and their daughters (Sarah, Hannah, Cathrine and Elizabeth).
I agree. I think this is one of the biggest issues with Harem themed games in general is pacing and development and giving everyone the attention they need/deserve.
Overall I think Cosy Cafe is doing a good job of managing that but as a player I can't help but want more. I think ultimately I just don't want anyone but particularly Lucy to be lost in the shuffle.
Yea, it is sort of a necessary evil, when you think about it. Everyone has their favorites and so no matter what someone will be wishing their favorite gets "more" attention. All you can really hope for is that the pacing remains solid, which I agree with you that Cosy does a great job of keeping the pace.
I think I mentioned it before in a comment, but I would love to know more about the clumsy white-haired girl, Isabelle.
I really do enjoy this game so far, every bit of it. But i gotta say that Sarah is my absolute favorite and I love the direction and pace its going at, i just simply need more of it. All of it even. Love the other girls too, but Sarah is precious.
I'm mixed between Sarah and kitten then again I'm 6'3 so small people are just precious in general to me, but I do like the others as well and I'm hoping for more with Hannah she seems she'd be fun to join the squad fully
I love this game. Definitely in top 5 story category. The characters are loveable, the story is engaging, the writing is good( no trying to understand what they are meaning due to bad English/translation) this is a must play!
Damn, this is seriously a great example of engaging writing. The fact it took me hours to realise its not interactive because I was so engaged with the characters speaks for itself. This isnt some loosely connected series of sex scenes with a plot hastily written to connect the dots, im reading mainly because I want to know what happens next, I want to know how the girls will end up and see them grow.
While the negatively stereotyped "feminist" that it universally ignored and shown as a "haha dumb woman" doesn't sit well with me the writing overall is superb.
Genuinely great, can't wait for each new update to the story
Context is everything. The character you mention has lived her life in a not-so-large city where polygyny is essentially required of the hereditary ruling families.
You know, when I found Caribdis and their 'Once In a Lifetime' story, thought that was gonna be a once in a lifetime find quality wise. But damn if you haven't hit that mark as well. Keep it up.
Edit: Didn't see the pun until after posting the comment. I'm keeping it.
You seem to value good writing in your AVN, maybe give MIST and Now And Then a look, both are incredible stories and high quality works.
Not trying to undermine Cosy's work by any means, i am totally in the same boat with you on this. Just sharing knowledge in case you've not tried those.
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This game is truly amazing. While is pretty much just a "hey read this book I wrote" rather than having choices, the story itself is amazing and I genuinely felt emotions for the characters which is rare. As of 0.10.1, it had around 10-12 hrs of content at my reading speed (which I admit I was so hooked I lost my Saturday) but the variations in scenes, situations, and characters was amazing.
There were a few things that I would like to see improved some of which I don't know are in the author's control.
1. The elbows on these characters look like someone roughed them with sandpaper. I could see why the MC would have this but all the girls having it too drew me out a few times. I think it's a base model thing so honestly not sure what can be done about it but I don't think I've really seen other games with this...feature? 2. It might be coming in the future but it would be nice to see variations in pubic hair and some more medium chested girls. If I remember correctly, everyone is shaved and girls by and large have extremely voluminous bosoms with a couple small but...I may be in the minority on this one as a lot of erotic games tend to have nothing but large. Kinda like shopping for shirts and there are only small or x-large but nothing in between.
Yeah, nothing I can really do about the elbows right now unfortunately. That may change when I overhaul all of my graphical stuff some time in the first half of next year when I build a new PC though.
Pubic hair is probably not gonna happen, sorry! More medium sized chests are definitely coming down the line eventually, however. When I first made all of the main girls I deliberately made a range going from small to large, however it just so happened that the two smallest (Akatsuki/Sarah) and the two biggest (Lucy/Vicky) got all of the early attention.
Keep up the good work! It truly is an amazing story. Oh forgot to mention. I think there's a typo somewhere where it says "cottoned" instead of "caught on to" which I found funny.
I would love more screen time for my personal favorite and loveable / pitiful kultz Isabelle. Would be overjoyed if she were upgraded from side to main character. Though she has only really shown up three times, her clumsiness is as loveable as Scrat from Ice Age.
I suppose I just can't help but relate to / root for her, but in order for her to have success she must first have more screen time. Also, I am SOO curious as to why she wanted that favor and what her relationship is within the Founding Families.
Finally, I have a soft spot for white haired female leads (like Gwen from My Bully is my Lover), lol.
Great game overall. Plenty of girls that have each unique personalities(doesn't sound like much but most games fumble this), so youa ctually care about them. H scenes are well made, models are very nice, the plot is actually cool.
Honestly one of my favourite games I have played from here.
Went through this in a week and I can say this. Great writing, great visuals, and the intrigue is better than the sex scenes. And the sex is pretty damn good! That says a lot from me when I feel that 90% of VNs nowadays seem solely focused on being petty fap material. I am completely locked in on this story and cannot wait for there to be more. The only issue I had at all with this is one or two words missing from sentences and the fact that every elbow and knee looked like it belonged to someone who needs serious lotion. Lol. Keep up the fantastic work!
(NOTE: I am not the developer so take this with a huge grain of salt.)
Pregnancy logically makes sense for story progression and character development. The developers have mentioned that eventually they will be doing time skips to progress the story over wider amounts of time (rather than one day at a time).
There are several reasons time skips would be needed: among those reasons could be progressing to graduation, weddings, and... pregnancy.
So, I grabbed this after seeing Lucy as a Special Guest in That New Teacher, and I have to say... as someone who is usually hugely against linear visual novels without much choices, I have to admit, I was sad to see the screen saying I was at the end of the current update. I just downloaded this a few days ago and have went through it with most of my free time.
I really enjoy your characters' personalities and backstories and find myself constantly wondering how things will go for certain ones. I'll be honest, I grabbed this because of it being a school-themed H-game and found myself growing more disinterested in the H-scenes and spamming my spacebar through some to get back to the story and see what happens next for the more dramatic parts. I know you don't know me, so let me just say... I'm a huge perv so that is saying a lot about your writing, imho.
Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next update to see what happens to Team Fletcher!
just thought i would drop a review/ stream of thoughts i had for the game here.
kinda unique in the sense that it's almost more of a visual novel movie/ show more than an interactive game and i think that's more of a plus than a down side honestly. it looks like there was a token effort at the start to make choices that really didn't matter before giving up those not too far in and i kind of appreciate that.
i generally like to experience everything games like these have to offer and i bounce between the various girls but in the more sandbox style ones the author can't always account for what you have seen yet so scenes with the various girls tend to be very isolated from each other with very little cross over. and the ones with choices tend to only effect if your going to miss content or not.
this style cuts out the nonsense of the choice system and the linear style allows the author to tie all the girls stories very closely together. of course this style also lives and dies on how well the author can tell their story and sell their characters cause that's all it's selling and i honestly think they did a fantastic job.
the main plot isn't gonna win any awards for how interesting it is but does a solid job being the frame work for the character interactions and porn. the characters i think are the biggest selling point here the introductions the characters have and how they get involved with the protagonist can feel a bit forced and odd like the "cat" girl getting into him by sitting in his lap and getting him hard and then she is just like "this is now my life goal".
but once they get established just watching them interact is just a joy to watch. all the girls feel unique both visually and in their personalities and just seeing them react to various events and changes in relationship status or clash/ make friends with each other is a lot of fun.
the tone is very slice of life with very little drama or danger and what little there is just shakes up the status quo more than anything. the split between the school life and work feels really odd like it's half adult life and half highschool life and if i were to guess the school was added to make the cast interact with characters they normally wouldn't interact with naturally.
i like the pacing quite a bit giving just enough time of romance fluff and everyday life for each girl while also keeping the plot going at a good pace. i actually find some of the most interesting thing about romance is how it affects their day to day life and interactions with other people and this game is loaded with that so it scratches that niche itch for me.
it's definitely highlighted in the description but i will add for emphasis this is a highly male dom fetish story. both in and out of the bedroom the male lead makes sure he is very in charge of every situation and in general will act how most dudes imagine their best self being. don't mistake the male dom for being super hard core bdsm stuff even if their is some of that cause the tone is actually extremely wholesome.
i actually think the male dom fetish is criminally under represented in this style of game so it's pretty refreshing to see. i can also see a lot of attention to detail from the author to try and make the girls more real looking by adding things like pores, some rough texture to the shaved pubes area and a bit of meat curtains on the vaginas. but i do think they go over board with the wrinkles/calluses on the knees and elbows cause i am twice their age and i still got smoother skin there than they do. it doesn't ruin it or anything but it's definitely noticeable.
overall it was a great experience and i highly recommend it to anyone reading this. i'm sad i'm all caught up and it will probably be more than a year till i see more as i let the updates stack. cudos to the author cause you did some great work here.
** just a quick edit to mention i do think the girl introduction/ getting more involved get much better from sarah onward. not sure if that is just the author getting better at writing or just having that established cast gives them more room to let the new ones breath for their introductions but i thought i would bring it up regardless.
Thanks, that's an awesome review! And just to answer the very last point: while I would say my writing certainly has improved over the course of making the game, it's more just having room to breathe. Same with the Akatsuki introduction you mentioned previously actually; in the early content I felt a lot of pressure to make things move and get things established so as not to bore the reader, meaning the first three girls were more rushed than I would like. Especially Lucy; in hindsight I would have liked to take things much slower with her, and go deeper into the story with her mother.
One of the best harem stories I have seen. The concept is just within the limits of what we can suspend for disbelief, it allows the storyline to really take hold and allow the reader to get immersed. The storyline itself is engaging, and I am looking forward to what shapes up next. The only danger I could foresee on the horizon is possible side character bloat, but the author themselves would be the best judge on how many characters you can juggle along with the story, so I will defer to them.
This has no right whatsoever to be this excellent as a work of art. The primary theme of caring for hurt people, be they desperate, neglected, afraid, isolated, whatever it is, caring for hurt people through food (philosophically the sustenance of life), meaning using food to get them to open up to being cared for (which is a primary part of treating trauma of any variety), then using food as the gateway to seeing the world in reverse as in having them make the food to care for others so they understand what was done for them and why, which is a primary component to building trust.
This then weaves into the primary conflict of leadership and use of power and institutional change. The most important moment of this is when the most likable person with that power refers to Mr. Takemura as Mr. Wong, despite little to no narrative importance. Why is that so important? It's worth considering, but I won't ruin the opportunity for some contemplation.
The story is fun for sure I enjoy it very much. I love how you turned Victoria into one of the harem and her whole attitude flips. But my fav charchter is Lucy just something about her attitude. And she's gorgeous to boot. Rachel has my eye as well. Can't wait for more I'm an android user. And can't wait for a part 3. Please
I became so invested in the story that I legitimately ended up staying up all night playing! I can't wait for more, this is one of the best VN's out there in my opinion, the scenes and animation are amazing, but the story has me enthralled!
I was never going to dl this. Silly toonporn tits, so sick of that sh*t!
I don't remember dling but so glad I did. I have been waiting for latest instalment eagerly.
The characters really hooked me. Totally. Even the story had me in and I'm waiting for what's next.
Liked Lucy straight away. Thought I'd never like Victoria but now one of my faves. Akatsuki and Sarah were a great breath of fresh air, not having toonporn tits! A&S, easily the funniest and probably my fave girls.
Can't wait to see what happens next (haven't had chance to look at latest yet). You've got a real talent.
I love the blue and pink, by the way. No unneeded distractions nor unnecessary work for you.
Only gripe, didn't get to see Akatsuki take the plug in detail! And surely she should have had plug with tail!! ;)
Hopefully preggers will be optional and not HAVE to?
This is the first time I have ever commented on a game. Signed up just so I could say thank you!
Thank you.
Good luck and hope to see much more from you in the future.
I am eagerly awaiting updates to find out just WHAT her deal is!! I am just so invested in the characters and story now and am so sad I hit the end of the current build, I wanted it to just keep going damnit!
Unfortunately not. I looked into it when the free membership thing came out a few months ago, but patreon requires all adult content to be locked behind paid membership.
I know the MC is primarily a Male Dom, but not sure if he is exclusively a male dom. What I like about the MC is that he clearly desires to find (and appropriately reciprocate) each female's kink and love language. The question that I am curious about:
Will Female Domination ever be implemented as a kink for one of the girls? Only reason I ask is because all the current girls clearly show some form of a submissive nature, and I think it would be interesting to see a relationship dynamic of a more non-submissive female played out with the MC. (Akari or Elizabeth, maybe?)
I realy enjoy this game. Great story of MC, the Foundation familys story in backround.... amazing.... I like, that each girl has her own personality. I would realy love to see Rachal traped somwhere in cellar and spanked to cry. (she deserves it :) ). I wish you good luck
With pregnancy planned a long ways off, I was curious if there was ever going to be any planned time-skips?
Reason I ask is because I know the MC has already hinted at attending culinary school alongside Akatsuki. Pending MC dropping out of 3rd year, this would at least be somewhere around Day 200+. I am not sure if you have planned content for every day between Day 25 and when culinary school starts (honestly that would be impressive). That is, unless culinary school attendance is post-main storyline and would be a part of the epilogue (you do not have to answer this, mostly just pointless ramblings on my part)?
Yes, timeskips have been confirmed by Cosy. As the MC has said, weddings (and pregnancy) are years away in game. Even with time skips, that is also years way in dev time.
Oh man, yea you're right littlextiger. The MC claims to not even consider marriage until they are at least 21, which is 3 years (or Day 1095) away. I use the word "claims" because let's be honest, on Day 1 they also "claimed" to not be interested in getting involved with any girls and look where he is now on Day 25, lol.
What would happen if one or two girls get pregnant earlier? After all, each girl has a different personality, bond with the player character, desire, and perspective on sex. Allowing a girl who is more passionate about the player character to engage in dangerous sexual behavior first, and then wait until her belly cannot be hidden before revealing the fact that she is pregnant to others, can also highlight the character's personality traits, make the player character determined to get married, and promote the plot of other girls competing to become pregnant for the player character,
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I'm really enjoying this story. I like the girls and want to know more about each of them but I really wish there was more Lucy. She was so sweet and the interactions with her were cute in the beginning but I feel like she's been pushed out by all the others in the harem. It's hard to write content for so many but I feel like she needs more time with the MC so that she's "seen" like she was in the beginning.
I do agree that I feel as though furthering Lucy's story would be nice. To be honest, I was expecting some form of a follow-up 'retaliation' from her mother, to be honest. I mean, the cafe is really close to where she lives so there is no way her mother doesn't know where she is currently staying.
The challenge, I imagine, would be maintaining good pacing. Especially considering we are in the middle of establishing the dynamic between the MC and the other Founding Family heads and their daughters (Sarah, Hannah, Cathrine and Elizabeth).
I agree. I think this is one of the biggest issues with Harem themed games in general is pacing and development and giving everyone the attention they need/deserve.
Overall I think Cosy Cafe is doing a good job of managing that but as a player I can't help but want more. I think ultimately I just don't want anyone but particularly Lucy to be lost in the shuffle.
Yea, it is sort of a necessary evil, when you think about it. Everyone has their favorites and so no matter what someone will be wishing their favorite gets "more" attention. All you can really hope for is that the pacing remains solid, which I agree with you that Cosy does a great job of keeping the pace.
I think I mentioned it before in a comment, but I would love to know more about the clumsy white-haired girl, Isabelle.
Do you have Chinese?
how do I make it stop saying day one Saturday after every single line ?
I really do enjoy this game so far, every bit of it. But i gotta say that Sarah is my absolute favorite and I love the direction and pace its going at, i just simply need more of it. All of it even. Love the other girls too, but Sarah is precious.
I'm mixed between Sarah and kitten then again I'm 6'3 so small people are just precious in general to me, but I do like the others as well and I'm hoping for more with Hannah she seems she'd be fun to join the squad fully
I love this game. Definitely in top 5 story category. The characters are loveable, the story is engaging, the writing is good( no trying to understand what they are meaning due to bad English/translation) this is a must play!
is the story are completed yet or still ongoing?
Ongoing
To further clarify what @Grandisire said, it is ongoing and looks to have a LOT more room for story development.
thanks guy
Damn, this is seriously a great example of engaging writing. The fact it took me hours to realise its not interactive because I was so engaged with the characters speaks for itself. This isnt some loosely connected series of sex scenes with a plot hastily written to connect the dots, im reading mainly because I want to know what happens next, I want to know how the girls will end up and see them grow.
While the negatively stereotyped "feminist" that it universally ignored and shown as a "haha dumb woman" doesn't sit well with me the writing overall is superb.
Genuinely great, can't wait for each new update to the story
Context is everything. The character you mention has lived her life in a not-so-large city where polygyny is essentially required of the hereditary ruling families.
You know, when I found Caribdis and their 'Once In a Lifetime' story, thought that was gonna be a once in a lifetime find quality wise. But damn if you haven't hit that mark as well. Keep it up.
Edit: Didn't see the pun until after posting the comment. I'm keeping it.
Wow, thank you; that's a hell of a compliment!
You seem to value good writing in your AVN, maybe give MIST and Now And Then a look, both are incredible stories and high quality works.
Not trying to undermine Cosy's work by any means, i am totally in the same boat with you on this. Just sharing knowledge in case you've not tried those.
I have not. I'll give them a check.
Little over a month since .10 dropped and I can't stop thinking what'll be next after where we left off...
Hi,dear creator,i have problem to download ur great game,could u give a other download link :)
Sorry, I can't here - the last time I did that itch's automod falsely flagged me as a spammer. If you join the discord link at the top of the page you can get it there.
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which channel?
I've pinned it in Cosy-Cafe-General
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keep continuing your great work,i crazy about this game:)))
This game is truly amazing. While is pretty much just a "hey read this book I wrote" rather than having choices, the story itself is amazing and I genuinely felt emotions for the characters which is rare. As of 0.10.1, it had around 10-12 hrs of content at my reading speed (which I admit I was so hooked I lost my Saturday) but the variations in scenes, situations, and characters was amazing.
There were a few things that I would like to see improved some of which I don't know are in the author's control.
1. The elbows on these characters look like someone roughed them with sandpaper. I could see why the MC would have this but all the girls having it too drew me out a few times. I think it's a base model thing so honestly not sure what can be done about it but I don't think I've really seen other games with this...feature?
2. It might be coming in the future but it would be nice to see variations in pubic hair and some more medium chested girls. If I remember correctly, everyone is shaved and girls by and large have extremely voluminous bosoms with a couple small but...I may be in the minority on this one as a lot of erotic games tend to have nothing but large. Kinda like shopping for shirts and there are only small or x-large but nothing in between.
Hey, thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
Yeah, nothing I can really do about the elbows right now unfortunately. That may change when I overhaul all of my graphical stuff some time in the first half of next year when I build a new PC though.
Pubic hair is probably not gonna happen, sorry! More medium sized chests are definitely coming down the line eventually, however. When I first made all of the main girls I deliberately made a range going from small to large, however it just so happened that the two smallest (Akatsuki/Sarah) and the two biggest (Lucy/Vicky) got all of the early attention.
Keep up the good work! It truly is an amazing story. Oh forgot to mention. I think there's a typo somewhere where it says "cottoned" instead of "caught on to" which I found funny.
Thanks again! That's not a typo, it's a British idiom.
I would love more screen time for my personal favorite and loveable / pitiful kultz Isabelle. Would be overjoyed if she were upgraded from side to main character. Though she has only really shown up three times, her clumsiness is as loveable as Scrat from Ice Age.
I suppose I just can't help but relate to / root for her, but in order for her to have success she must first have more screen time. Also, I am SOO curious as to why she wanted that favor and what her relationship is within the Founding Families.
Finally, I have a soft spot for white haired female leads (like Gwen from My Bully is my Lover), lol.
It won't be for a while, but don't worry, she definitely has a significant part to play eventually!
Yay!
Great game overall.
Honestly one of my favourite games I have played from here.Plenty of girls that have each unique personalities(doesn't sound like much but most games fumble this), so youa ctually care about them.
H scenes are well made, models are very nice, the plot is actually cool.
I would rate this game 10 if I could.
Honest Review.
Went through this in a week and I can say this. Great writing, great visuals, and the intrigue is better than the sex scenes. And the sex is pretty damn good! That says a lot from me when I feel that 90% of VNs nowadays seem solely focused on being petty fap material. I am completely locked in on this story and cannot wait for there to be more. The only issue I had at all with this is one or two words missing from sentences and the fact that every elbow and knee looked like it belonged to someone who needs serious lotion. Lol. Keep up the fantastic work!
I wonder if pregnancy will ever be a thing in here. I'm partial to that lol
(NOTE: I am not the developer so take this with a huge grain of salt.)
Pregnancy logically makes sense for story progression and character development. The developers have mentioned that eventually they will be doing time skips to progress the story over wider amounts of time (rather than one day at a time).
There are several reasons time skips would be needed: among those reasons could be progressing to graduation, weddings, and... pregnancy.
So, I grabbed this after seeing Lucy as a Special Guest in That New Teacher, and I have to say... as someone who is usually hugely against linear visual novels without much choices, I have to admit, I was sad to see the screen saying I was at the end of the current update. I just downloaded this a few days ago and have went through it with most of my free time.
I really enjoy your characters' personalities and backstories and find myself constantly wondering how things will go for certain ones. I'll be honest, I grabbed this because of it being a school-themed H-game and found myself growing more disinterested in the H-scenes and spamming my spacebar through some to get back to the story and see what happens next for the more dramatic parts. I know you don't know me, so let me just say... I'm a huge perv so that is saying a lot about your writing, imho.
Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next update to see what happens to Team Fletcher!
just thought i would drop a review/ stream of thoughts i had for the game here.
kinda unique in the sense that it's almost more of a visual novel movie/ show more than an interactive game and i think that's more of a plus than a down side honestly. it looks like there was a token effort at the start to make choices that really didn't matter before giving up those not too far in and i kind of appreciate that.
i generally like to experience everything games like these have to offer and i bounce between the various girls but in the more sandbox style ones the author can't always account for what you have seen yet so scenes with the various girls tend to be very isolated from each other with very little cross over. and the ones with choices tend to only effect if your going to miss content or not.
this style cuts out the nonsense of the choice system and the linear style allows the author to tie all the girls stories very closely together. of course this style also lives and dies on how well the author can tell their story and sell their characters cause that's all it's selling and i honestly think they did a fantastic job.
the main plot isn't gonna win any awards for how interesting it is but does a solid job being the frame work for the character interactions and porn. the characters i think are the biggest selling point here the introductions the characters have and how they get involved with the protagonist can feel a bit forced and odd like the "cat" girl getting into him by sitting in his lap and getting him hard and then she is just like "this is now my life goal".
but once they get established just watching them interact is just a joy to watch. all the girls feel unique both visually and in their personalities and just seeing them react to various events and changes in relationship status or clash/ make friends with each other is a lot of fun.
the tone is very slice of life with very little drama or danger and what little there is just shakes up the status quo more than anything. the split between the school life and work feels really odd like it's half adult life and half highschool life and if i were to guess the school was added to make the cast interact with characters they normally wouldn't interact with naturally.
i like the pacing quite a bit giving just enough time of romance fluff and everyday life for each girl while also keeping the plot going at a good pace. i actually find some of the most interesting thing about romance is how it affects their day to day life and interactions with other people and this game is loaded with that so it scratches that niche itch for me.
it's definitely highlighted in the description but i will add for emphasis this is a highly male dom fetish story. both in and out of the bedroom the male lead makes sure he is very in charge of every situation and in general will act how most dudes imagine their best self being. don't mistake the male dom for being super hard core bdsm stuff even if their is some of that cause the tone is actually extremely wholesome.
i actually think the male dom fetish is criminally under represented in this style of game so it's pretty refreshing to see. i can also see a lot of attention to detail from the author to try and make the girls more real looking by adding things like pores, some rough texture to the shaved pubes area and a bit of meat curtains on the vaginas. but i do think they go over board with the wrinkles/calluses on the knees and elbows cause i am twice their age and i still got smoother skin there than they do. it doesn't ruin it or anything but it's definitely noticeable.
overall it was a great experience and i highly recommend it to anyone reading this. i'm sad i'm all caught up and it will probably be more than a year till i see more as i let the updates stack. cudos to the author cause you did some great work here.
** just a quick edit to mention i do think the girl introduction/ getting more involved get much better from sarah onward. not sure if that is just the author getting better at writing or just having that established cast gives them more room to let the new ones breath for their introductions but i thought i would bring it up regardless.
Thanks, that's an awesome review!
And just to answer the very last point: while I would say my writing certainly has improved over the course of making the game, it's more just having room to breathe. Same with the Akatsuki introduction you mentioned previously actually; in the early content I felt a lot of pressure to make things move and get things established so as not to bore the reader, meaning the first three girls were more rushed than I would like. Especially Lucy; in hindsight I would have liked to take things much slower with her, and go deeper into the story with her mother.
Was not expecting to see a Lucy cameo in the latest version of That New Teacher. Was a pleasant surprise!
Yeah, Rogue (the dev of TnT) is a great guy - he's helped me out on a few occasions when I've got stuck with things.
How do I find your discord
There's a link at the top of the page.
I really love it when she showed off her new pink phone too hehee. She was so cute. Cannot wait for yours new update.
One of the best harem stories I have seen. The concept is just within the limits of what we can suspend for disbelief, it allows the storyline to really take hold and allow the reader to get immersed. The storyline itself is engaging, and I am looking forward to what shapes up next. The only danger I could foresee on the horizon is possible side character bloat, but the author themselves would be the best judge on how many characters you can juggle along with the story, so I will defer to them.
10 out of 10 this game rocks awesome story can't wait to see more keep up the great work
About how long for the next update
the story🔥🔥
Hold up, THE WRITING IS THIS FIRE???
"...you overcooked the Shrimp!" - lol - that was a good one!
This has no right whatsoever to be this excellent as a work of art. The primary theme of caring for hurt people, be they desperate, neglected, afraid, isolated, whatever it is, caring for hurt people through food (philosophically the sustenance of life), meaning using food to get them to open up to being cared for (which is a primary part of treating trauma of any variety), then using food as the gateway to seeing the world in reverse as in having them make the food to care for others so they understand what was done for them and why, which is a primary component to building trust.
This then weaves into the primary conflict of leadership and use of power and institutional change. The most important moment of this is when the most likable person with that power refers to Mr. Takemura as Mr. Wong, despite little to no narrative importance. Why is that so important? It's worth considering, but I won't ruin the opportunity for some contemplation.
Also I guess there are boobs.
The story is fun for sure I enjoy it very much. I love how you turned Victoria into one of the harem and her whole attitude flips. But my fav charchter is Lucy just something about her attitude. And she's gorgeous to boot. Rachel has my eye as well. Can't wait for more I'm an android user. And can't wait for a part 3. Please
Just wanted to comment that the Discord link seems to have expired.
Clicking it seemed to take me the the invite landing page just fine. I think Cosy set it up as a forever-invite.
It sends me to the landing page, but when I click 'join' it tells me the link is either invalid or expired.
This game changed my life
I became so invested in the story that I legitimately ended up staying up all night playing! I can't wait for more, this is one of the best VN's out there in my opinion, the scenes and animation are amazing, but the story has me enthralled!
That's awesome, glad you liked it!
Choosing beggar over here.
Would like it if the update posts said what day they go to. I hate being blindsided with it suddenly ending without me knowing its approaching
Since release, all updates have been 1 or 2 full days.
Cosy has stated that the upcoming version (0.11) will be a single day.
Perhaps going forward, it might be in the release notes, but just brace for it when you go to sleep. If you happen to make it to a second day, huzzah!
Hey, that's no problem at all. I'll try to remember next time!
I was never going to dl this. Silly toonporn tits, so sick of that sh*t!
I don't remember dling but so glad I did. I have been waiting for latest instalment eagerly.
The characters really hooked me. Totally. Even the story had me in and I'm waiting for what's next.
Liked Lucy straight away. Thought I'd never like Victoria but now one of my faves. Akatsuki and Sarah were a great breath of fresh air, not having toonporn tits! A&S, easily the funniest and probably my fave girls.
Can't wait to see what happens next (haven't had chance to look at latest yet). You've got a real talent.
I love the blue and pink, by the way. No unneeded distractions nor unnecessary work for you.
Only gripe, didn't get to see Akatsuki take the plug in detail! And surely she should have had plug with tail!! ;)
Hopefully preggers will be optional and not HAVE to?
This is the first time I have ever commented on a game. Signed up just so I could say thank you!
Thank you.
Good luck and hope to see much more from you in the future.
Absolutely love this!
I can't help but wonder if rachel will turn out to be a hardcore masochist.
I am eagerly awaiting updates to find out just WHAT her deal is!! I am just so invested in the characters and story now and am so sad I hit the end of the current build, I wanted it to just keep going damnit!
I'm off the mindset she shouldn't be an LI, then again I'm sure we did have a similar mindset for some of the LIs early on. Cosy be cooking.
Can someone give me a mega download link? Whenever I download it from google it says "Download Forbidden". I'm on Android
Hey, sorry, I can't post download links here anymore, but if you join the discord I can give you them there.
you could post a download on patreon for those who wait for the free download
Unfortunately not. I looked into it when the free membership thing came out a few months ago, but patreon requires all adult content to be locked behind paid membership.
that sucks i cant download here since its over 5
I'm playing android and all character bios are unmet in part 2.
They will unlock when you get to the end.
I know the MC is primarily a Male Dom, but not sure if he is exclusively a male dom. What I like about the MC is that he clearly desires to find (and appropriately reciprocate) each female's kink and love language. The question that I am curious about:
Will Female Domination ever be implemented as a kink for one of the girls? Only reason I ask is because all the current girls clearly show some form of a submissive nature, and I think it would be interesting to see a relationship dynamic of a more non-submissive female played out with the MC. (Akari or Elizabeth, maybe?)
Nope, there won't be any femdom. It would be completely at odds with the MC's personality, he's not even remotely submissive. Sorry!
You don't have to apologize, I completely understand. That's what sexual compatibility is all about and it makes complete sense.
Was just mostly curious.
I realy enjoy this game. Great story of MC, the Foundation familys story in backround.... amazing.... I like, that each girl has her own personality. I would realy love to see Rachal traped somwhere in cellar and spanked to cry. (she deserves it :) ). I wish you good luck
wil their be pregnancy someday in the future
By the way I love the story
Personally, to some extent I think that pregnancy content is inevitable. ALL of this is conjecture, by the way, since I am not the developer.
EDIT: I had a really long rant but removed it because I didn't want potential spoilers.
Eventually, yes. But not for a long time.
With pregnancy planned a long ways off, I was curious if there was ever going to be any planned time-skips?
Reason I ask is because I know the MC has already hinted at attending culinary school alongside Akatsuki. Pending MC dropping out of 3rd year, this would at least be somewhere around Day 200+. I am not sure if you have planned content for every day between Day 25 and when culinary school starts (honestly that would be impressive). That is, unless culinary school attendance is post-main storyline and would be a part of the epilogue (you do not have to answer this, mostly just pointless ramblings on my part)?
Yes, timeskips have been confirmed by Cosy. As the MC has said, weddings (and pregnancy) are years away in game. Even with time skips, that is also years way in dev time.
Oh man, yea you're right littlextiger. The MC claims to not even consider marriage until they are at least 21, which is 3 years (or Day 1095) away. I use the word "claims" because let's be honest, on Day 1 they also "claimed" to not be interested in getting involved with any girls and look where he is now on Day 25, lol.
What would happen if one or two girls get pregnant earlier? After all, each girl has a different personality, bond with the player character, desire, and perspective on sex. Allowing a girl who is more passionate about the player character to engage in dangerous sexual behavior first, and then wait until her belly cannot be hidden before revealing the fact that she is pregnant to others, can also highlight the character's personality traits, make the player character determined to get married, and promote the plot of other girls competing to become pregnant for the player character,
Pretty good
Want to play a drinking game? Every time he smacks their butt, take a drink :P
No thank you, I don't want to die of alcohol poisoning, lol.
LOL i know right