Well, I was slowly won over by this comic. It's not my favorite style. I don't like any kind of domineering stuffs going on. But people seem to be able to choose their own destiny if they want. The comic finally won me over because I was given the choice as to whether or not I'm into feet - which I happen not to be. I do not like comics that just put people's feet in my face. This comic asked permission. I'm grateful. Thanks. I'm not familiar with this kind of 3D vs say things done with DAZ studio, but I think I might like this style better than the usual 3D type art. One thing that bothers me about this and all of these style comics is the endless giant boobs and giant butts. They just don't do anything for me, and it seems like the rule that EVERYONE and I mean EVERY. SINGLE. COMIC has to have mostly giant boobs and butts. At least the bodies in this are very beautiful. [edit] There is the usual ... too large breasts for me at least. But this comic actually deals with the idea that women's breasts aren't all the same.
Thanks for a great comic. When I'm working, I'll donate.
Mostly. There are 12 animated scenes (generally the longer and more significant ones), and then a number of blowjob/handjob/fingering scenes that are just renders (these are generally the ones that are more about fooling around, or contain a lot of dialogue while the sex act is happening on the side)
The consent and communication in this game is hot as fuck. Even if I do feel like the MC pushes the edge a bit too hard in a few places (mostly with Sarah), it's rare to see an explicitly dominant MC who actually discusses boundary-setting, asks about limits, and checks in with his partners during intimacy.
Although, side note: I do find it a pity that the only voice of "feminism" in the game is a batshit crazy prude, which seems to be pretty common in these games. As someone who's kinky and poly, in my experience feminists tend to be more likely to be accepting of non-traditional relationships like this one, not less. Just seems off for a game that's mostly so good about consent to have the only character who ever really talks about it in those terms have no idea what the word means.
Ah well, that's a minor gripe. Still one of the hottest games I've ever played. There are AVNs who I ranked higher on story or character (though not many), but I don't think I've played one that got me more turned on than this one. Keep up the great work.
(This comment was written while downloading 0.8, so is only based on up to 0.7.)
I haven't had much opportunity recently, but before Cosy Cafe swallowed all of my free time I used to read a lot of light novels. Not sure if you're interested in them, but my favourites are probably Yahari Ore no Seishun Love Comedy wa Machigatteiru, Log Horizon, and Shin no Nakama ja Nai to Yuusha no Party wo Oidasareta node, Henkyou de Slow Life suru Koto ni Shimashita (damn, that's a long title...)
Just wanted to post a comment to tell you how much I absolutely adore your game! The simultaneous wholesome adorable moments and the perfectly written smut is phenomenal. I only just discovered the game and I've practically devoured the entire thing and already can't wait for more. Thank you for making this.
I'm in the middle of adding a lot more music throughout the game, so I don't have a complete list right now. However I do plan on making one in time for the public release of version 0.8 next weekend. In the meantime, if there are any specific songs you want, let me know and I can get you links.
Thanks, I really appreciate the offer, but I'm not doing any official translations at the moment. I have a full time job so the time I can spend on development is limited unfortunately, however it's definitely something I'll think about doing in the future.
What a cute, well-written story! Well-paced narrative that draws you in, with good character development. Happy to subscribe on Patreon to support the development, and also to get the next part a little earlier.
I will say that I have played a lot of the games on itch.io multiple times. And this is the first one that i enjoyed just as much, if not more the second time. I can't wait for the next version, and I might actually sub to patreon (for the first time ever) just to get it 2 weeks early. That is how good i think this is. If you made any other game I would play it the second I saw it, which I also don't usually do because I usually want it to build up some. I would follow anything you wrote from the jump. Absolutely amazing. To me this is the best VN out there. Keep it up and cant wait for more.
If I gave it a score it is the easiest 10/10 for me. There is things that I would change personally, but I suck at coding and everything else so who am I to tell someone anything. I absolutely LOVE this vn. The things I would change would only be to make it more like myself as the MC, so not really a big thing lol.
I love cosy cafe I've been following it since you released it but because of my bad economy I've never been able to subscribe to your patron I'm looking forward to version 0.8 and I know I always ask this but the more so the less sacred it is.
You are the first creator I decided to actively follow.
I love the way your story feels, and the way your girls interact with the MC.
While I'm not able to subscribe to you just yet, I do eagerly wait for every new update, and love seeing your thumbnail in my emails when I get my feed updates.
This is amazing, wholesome and hot in one x3 Kinda feel like the protag is a little too pushy at times, but overall, I genuinely enjoy it =D
If I would have ANY critique towards the game, then it is that the girls are all completely shaved down there. I think that some girls, like Lucy and Akatsuki, I feel they wouldn't be shaved at all...
Maybe the developer might feel like giving us an option to turn Pubes on and off some day? I would really appreciate it =D
Hey, thanks - I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm unlikely to give options for pubes, as it would mean redoing every render/video where the girls appear naked. So it would take me probably months of work, and add a huge amount of file size - Sorry!
Nah, it's fine, but thanks for replying =D Maybe you can give one of the girls in the future some pubes? I just like to have some variety! But don't get me wrong, that is not a criticism! I am currently playing 0.8 and I LOVE it so far =D Thank you for giving us such a great novel! I genuinely enjoy it, not just for the sex ^__^
Well I basically "spun the wheel" and just scrolled rapidly through Itch.io and came across this. i want to start by saying that im enjoying it immensely,(I was about to post this and went back and saw that this I'd your first Visual Novel? Idk if that means it's your first project ever but if so Bravo lol) anyway I absolutely adore the characters and that's my main draw, the main girls are amazing and the Café storyline was a really nice change of pace from the how over the top stuff like this usually ends up being. However I think im pretty much at the end of 0.7? (just hit day 20, i thought day 19 would be the end of it) and I gotta say I'm not a huge fan of the whole behind the scenes sketchy family feud mega drama stuff. Being backed into a corner by all these ravenous power hungry thoughtless assholes and being unable to do anything is really off-putting for me, and Personally with how good of a job you've done with the main characters I think the simple Café storyline would've been more than sufficient. But that's just me lol, I hope the Family feud stuff doesn't end up getting too over the top towards the end with all this forced marriage stuff. it won't exactly stop me from enjoying the other aspects of the game but I'd definitely skip most of it. Maybe there'll be an option to just take your girls and peace out towards the end? Idk. Either way I look forward to finishing 0.7 up and staring 0.8 soon. Definitely earned a follow. Thank you for the lovely experience so far🤍
Hello Actually I Want To Ask You When You're going to release the Cosy Cafe version 0.8 for public and also overall thankyou for making this game It's a Really Good Novel Game.
I'm inlove with this game and ranking it on the same tier as Once In A Lifetime, Eternum, and Evermore (my favorites). Though it doesn't have a lot of drama and action (maybe not yet), the story is so vanilla and romantic you'll just fall knees deep in it. Very good job to the creator for making this game and pls, I'm dying for update 0.8.
Fellow Cari fan here lol. i agree. Its very hard to beat Once in a lifetime(first ever experience with games like this) and eternum is so damn good so far. But I'd definitely rank this up there somwhere with them. Though im not sure if I've heard of evermore. I may have to check it out. Have you tried Projekt: Passion by chance? That's another good one.
Just got to meeting Vicky's brother- but wanted to pause to give my comment. Love this AVN so far. And thank you for having one of the few AVNs where the girls keep their heels on when they are being lewd - cant get enough of that!
Honestly, i've recently tried a few games like this... not one has actually got me genuinely enjoying it for the plot, and i mean actual plot, the story is great, just as the visuals are great, and the different characters, finally a game that doesn't make one personality and is done, great job!
i have played a lot of AVNs but this one is a treasure! super good writing, i would read this as light novel even without the visuals :D and the pacing is top tier, thank you so much for making it
I am a very story-focused VN enjoyer, so when I saw one about a cafe I was skeptical. It sat in my "Later" collection for some time. Having played through 0.7 I can say with certainty this has become one of my absolute favorite VNs.
The only feedback I can give is just a slight disappointment in not seeing certain... events with the girls.
The most important of the two is cunnilingus. Seeing how much the MC truly loves and cherishes his girls, I was disappointed that he never went down on them, returning the service that they have provided him.
The other is not nearly as important and may be included in future updates... That would be "cum swapping". Specifically at the end of 0.7 when the girls are right next to each other. It felt like the right moment for the MC to exert some dominance with each of their personalities and budding interests. Seems like a missed opportunity sadly.
It's from all over the place and I don't have a comprehensive list at hand, but if there are any specific pieces you want, let me know and I'll find them.
I fucking love this game. The characters are amazing, the story is fascinating and I cannot wait for the next update. I'm so in love with the design of Lucy, it's exactly my type of girl and I really love her characterization. Looking forward to the next update and hopefully WE can enter new stages with Sarah
I really love the models. Just one thing, is it only me, or did anyone else mentioned that the headmistress eyebrows looks a bit strange. I feel like they are too high and in many images it looks like she is missing them, when you look at her face (yes she still has them, but at such a high place that it seems like they are missing). Its a beautifull model, but from the first moment i have seen her, it distracted me :)
One another thing, there is mentioned pregnancy in planed tags. Will it be in a way, that the girls will stop using their pills after discussing it with you? So you can avoid it? I am not really into preggo. Its not a game breaker, but if i can avoid it, i prefer that.
Pregnancy won't be avoidable, but it won't come until very late in the story, at which point it will just make sense for it to become a part of the characters' lives.
What an amazing game! I can't believe this is your first game. How is that possible? I hope you never stop. I actually played the game from the beginning a 2nd time while waiting for updates. I'd usually only do that to selected different choices or routes in games with choices, and I'd skip over most things, but I didn't skip a single part here. It's all just always so intriguing and entertaining. I love so much about the game, so many general aspects I can point out, let alone all the specific scenes which is pretty much every scene.
Just to make it more perfect, I noticed a handful of mistakes in the text. Day 18 in the kitchen at the party, Lily has one line and says something like "I should have know Gilbert would bring you here". Know should be known. The other mistakes were all the same thing with the word "passed". Passed is should only be used as a verb. "Past" is the noun, like a location. I saw it 3 times, first time being after the girls dry off from the rain (day 19), saying they walked "passed" you. Another Catherine looks "passed" you at the girls coming down the steps at the cafe. Last one I saw so far is when Sarah changes out of Akatsuki's cooking uniform and rushes right "passed".
I was also wondering how you manage to come up with so much great stuff. I cackled so many times at the incredible lines, flirty moves, or just incredible moments, like when you compliment Lucy and Hanna for their maid uniforms, but just glance at Victoria without saying anything to tease her. Or the knowing smiles everyone gives Hanna after she comes out of your office after getting spanked. I really appreciate these small details. I also love how much is expressed with the small changes in the head and body positioning and facial expressions.
I thought the scene with Victoria on the bench in the park when it started raining was going to lead to some sex in the rain. I mean, I guess it might not be great for a virgin scene and the issues with pain. But it was quite romantic and beautiful. It could make for yet another special and unique sex scene, as all have been so far. I love how natural and I guess spontaneous (if that's the best way to describe them) the scenes are. I hope it doesn't change. If you run out of ideas, maybe I can brainstorm some ideas to inspire you. Because I can't imagine a human being keeping this up as well as you have. Amazing!
Thank you, that's really amazing feedback! Especially the bit about facial expressions, as that's the most common complaint I get - some people can't read them at all, and think I don't put any effort into it, but I really do! I just prefer a more subtle style instead of the huge, over exaggerated, constantly open mouthed expressions that some other AVNs do.
The past/passed thing is something I always screw up unfortunately, it just doesn't stand out to me as wrong for some reason when I write/proofread, so I really appreciate when people point them out.
As for ideas, mostly it just comes naturally to me I suppose, but I do occasionally get inspiration from people discussing the story and theorycrafting on my discord, so if you want to contribute there you're more than welcome!
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One of the best VN I've played. Can't wait for more.
Well, I was slowly won over by this comic. It's not my favorite style. I don't like any kind of domineering stuffs going on. But people seem to be able to choose their own destiny if they want. The comic finally won me over because I was given the choice as to whether or not I'm into feet - which I happen not to be. I do not like comics that just put people's feet in my face. This comic asked permission. I'm grateful. Thanks. I'm not familiar with this kind of 3D vs say things done with DAZ studio, but I think I might like this style better than the usual 3D type art. One thing that bothers me about this and all of these style comics is the endless giant boobs and giant butts. They just don't do anything for me, and it seems like the rule that EVERYONE and I mean EVERY. SINGLE. COMIC has to have mostly giant boobs and butts. At least the bodies in this are very beautiful. [edit] There is the usual ... too large breasts for me at least. But this comic actually deals with the idea that women's breasts aren't all the same.
Thanks for a great comic. When I'm working, I'll donate.
AGREE too much. Chubby big boobs big butts not enough normal and petite bodies in vns,
Also he's using honey select 2 to make the models.
are the scenes animated?
Mostly. There are 12 animated scenes (generally the longer and more significant ones), and then a number of blowjob/handjob/fingering scenes that are just renders (these are generally the ones that are more about fooling around, or contain a lot of dialogue while the sex act is happening on the side)
The consent and communication in this game is hot as fuck. Even if I do feel like the MC pushes the edge a bit too hard in a few places (mostly with Sarah), it's rare to see an explicitly dominant MC who actually discusses boundary-setting, asks about limits, and checks in with his partners during intimacy.
Although, side note: I do find it a pity that the only voice of "feminism" in the game is a batshit crazy prude, which seems to be pretty common in these games. As someone who's kinky and poly, in my experience feminists tend to be more likely to be accepting of non-traditional relationships like this one, not less. Just seems off for a game that's mostly so good about consent to have the only character who ever really talks about it in those terms have no idea what the word means.
Ah well, that's a minor gripe. Still one of the hottest games I've ever played. There are AVNs who I ranked higher on story or character (though not many), but I don't think I've played one that got me more turned on than this one. Keep up the great work.
(This comment was written while downloading 0.8, so is only based on up to 0.7.)
I've had this one downloaded and not played it yet. Thanks for the thoughts. It made me decide to try it.
Agree with the feminist. Hope she gets redemption or something or have another not be crazy
just finished 0.8, so wholesome it almost made me shed a tear
still unsure about hannah, but catherine may be a good addition to the harem
Glad you liked it! I'm definitely looking forward to Catherine, too.
Been waiting for this for a month! WOOT!
new update just drop let's go!!(Thank you Creator for this beautiful update)
You seems very humble and friendly, nicely.
Uhmm, do you like to read book? what book do you recommend me to read while wating for new update?
Hey, thanks!
I haven't had much opportunity recently, but before Cosy Cafe swallowed all of my free time I used to read a lot of light novels. Not sure if you're interested in them, but my favourites are probably Yahari Ore no Seishun Love Comedy wa Machigatteiru, Log Horizon, and Shin no Nakama ja Nai to Yuusha no Party wo Oidasareta node, Henkyou de Slow Life suru Koto ni Shimashita (damn, that's a long title...)
I definitely will read them all, thanks.
Where i can download v 0.1, please...
If you download 0.8 you'll be able to play all of the content from earlier updates such as 0.1.
I just realized it, thankyou for your help, ppl in discord really nice. Arigatou gozaimasu.🙏
Just wanted to post a comment to tell you how much I absolutely adore your game! The simultaneous wholesome adorable moments and the perfectly written smut is phenomenal. I only just discovered the game and I've practically devoured the entire thing and already can't wait for more. Thank you for making this.
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
What's the music in the game? Some of it's quite catchy
I'm in the middle of adding a lot more music throughout the game, so I don't have a complete list right now. However I do plan on making one in time for the public release of version 0.8 next weekend. In the meantime, if there are any specific songs you want, let me know and I can get you links.
If you need help i could translate into swedish for you? I love the game so why not
Thanks, I really appreciate the offer, but I'm not doing any official translations at the moment. I have a full time job so the time I can spend on development is limited unfortunately, however it's definitely something I'll think about doing in the future.
Hey, are there only three characters so far? I stopped playing when I got to 0.6. I want to wait for 0.10 before I plan to see what the content is 😊
No there are far more than three characters.
amzing game. love the animations as well as the whole story itself.
Thanks!
What a cute, well-written story! Well-paced narrative that draws you in, with good character development. Happy to subscribe on Patreon to support the development, and also to get the next part a little earlier.
I will say that I have played a lot of the games on itch.io multiple times. And this is the first one that i enjoyed just as much, if not more the second time. I can't wait for the next version, and I might actually sub to patreon (for the first time ever) just to get it 2 weeks early. That is how good i think this is. If you made any other game I would play it the second I saw it, which I also don't usually do because I usually want it to build up some. I would follow anything you wrote from the jump. Absolutely amazing. To me this is the best VN out there. Keep it up and cant wait for more.
If I gave it a score it is the easiest 10/10 for me. There is things that I would change personally, but I suck at coding and everything else so who am I to tell someone anything. I absolutely LOVE this vn. The things I would change would only be to make it more like myself as the MC, so not really a big thing lol.
Wow, thank you so much!
I love cosy cafe I've been following it since you released it but because of my bad economy I've never been able to subscribe to your patron I'm looking forward to version 0.8 and I know I always ask this but the more so the less sacred it is.
Don't worry about it, I'm just glad you're still enjoying the game!
High-quality Wholesome Harem
Would recommend
You are the first creator I decided to actively follow.
I love the way your story feels, and the way your girls interact with the MC.
While I'm not able to subscribe to you just yet, I do eagerly wait for every new update, and love seeing your thumbnail in my emails when I get my feed updates.
Thanks, that's really nice to hear!
This is amazing, wholesome and hot in one x3 Kinda feel like the protag is a little too pushy at times, but overall, I genuinely enjoy it =D
If I would have ANY critique towards the game, then it is that the girls are all completely shaved down there. I think that some girls, like Lucy and Akatsuki, I feel they wouldn't be shaved at all...
Maybe the developer might feel like giving us an option to turn Pubes on and off some day? I would really appreciate it =D
Hey, thanks - I'm glad you're enjoying it!
I'm unlikely to give options for pubes, as it would mean redoing every render/video where the girls appear naked. So it would take me probably months of work, and add a huge amount of file size - Sorry!
Nah, it's fine, but thanks for replying =D
Maybe you can give one of the girls in the future some pubes? I just like to have some variety!
But don't get me wrong, that is not a criticism! I am currently playing 0.8 and I LOVE it so far =D Thank you for giving us such a great novel! I genuinely enjoy it, not just for the sex ^__^
Well I basically "spun the wheel" and just scrolled rapidly through Itch.io and came across this. i want to start by saying that im enjoying it immensely,(I was about to post this and went back and saw that this I'd your first Visual Novel? Idk if that means it's your first project ever but if so Bravo lol) anyway I absolutely adore the characters and that's my main draw, the main girls are amazing and the Café storyline was a really nice change of pace from the how over the top stuff like this usually ends up being. However I think im pretty much at the end of 0.7? (just hit day 20, i thought day 19 would be the end of it) and I gotta say I'm not a huge fan of the whole behind the scenes sketchy family feud mega drama stuff. Being backed into a corner by all these ravenous power hungry thoughtless assholes and being unable to do anything is really off-putting for me, and Personally with how good of a job you've done with the main characters I think the simple Café storyline would've been more than sufficient. But that's just me lol, I hope the Family feud stuff doesn't end up getting too over the top towards the end with all this forced marriage stuff. it won't exactly stop me from enjoying the other aspects of the game but I'd definitely skip most of it. Maybe there'll be an option to just take your girls and peace out towards the end? Idk. Either way I look forward to finishing 0.7 up and staring 0.8 soon. Definitely earned a follow. Thank you for the lovely experience so far🤍
Hello Actually I Want To Ask You When You're going to release the Cosy Cafe version 0.8 for public and also overall thankyou for making this game It's a Really Good Novel Game.
Hey, thanks for playing! The public release for 0.8 will be April 6th.
just caught up to 0.7 in 3 days, the story is AMAZING. definatly up there with eternum
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
I'm inlove with this game and ranking it on the same tier as Once In A Lifetime, Eternum, and Evermore (my favorites). Though it doesn't have a lot of drama and action (maybe not yet), the story is so vanilla and romantic you'll just fall knees deep in it. Very good job to the creator for making this game and pls, I'm dying for update 0.8.
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Fellow Cari fan here lol. i agree. Its very hard to beat Once in a lifetime(first ever experience with games like this) and eternum is so damn good so far. But I'd definitely rank this up there somwhere with them. Though im not sure if I've heard of evermore. I may have to check it out. Have you tried Projekt: Passion by chance? That's another good one.
Bro when will v0.8 release for free, please get it available this March🙏, I love your game
April 6th, sorry!
Just got to meeting Vicky's brother- but wanted to pause to give my comment. Love this AVN so far. And thank you for having one of the few AVNs where the girls keep their heels on when they are being lewd - cant get enough of that!
Thanks, glad you're enjoying it!
And yeah, I'm not a foot guy, but heels are hot!
Honestly, i've recently tried a few games like this... not one has actually got me genuinely enjoying it for the plot, and i mean actual plot, the story is great, just as the visuals are great, and the different characters, finally a game that doesn't make one personality and is done, great job!
truly can't wait for the next update.
Getting really worried about what's happening with Akatsuki ngl
I think she is being forced to ignore MC now.
This has a great story and I really hope will not disappear any time soon in the future LOVE IT
Glad you liked it! It's not going anywhere any time soon - in fact, I'm gearing up to release the next update for early access in a few days.
i have played a lot of AVNs but this one is a treasure! super good writing, i would read this as light novel even without the visuals :D and the pacing is top tier, thank you so much for making it
Thank you! I read a lot of light novels (well, I used to when I still had the time), so no doubt there's some influence seeped in from there.
Hey is it possible to make a external download link for android? (My device won't download files more than 1gb on itch)
GoFile work?
Yes it does thank you!
THIS IS AN AMAZING GAME KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
Thanks!
I am a very story-focused VN enjoyer, so when I saw one about a cafe I was skeptical. It sat in my "Later" collection for some time. Having played through 0.7 I can say with certainty this has become one of my absolute favorite VNs.
The only feedback I can give is just a slight disappointment in not seeing certain... events with the girls.
The most important of the two is cunnilingus. Seeing how much the MC truly loves and cherishes his girls, I was disappointed that he never went down on them, returning the service that they have provided him.
The other is not nearly as important and may be included in future updates... That would be "cum swapping". Specifically at the end of 0.7 when the girls are right next to each other. It felt like the right moment for the MC to exert some dominance with each of their personalities and budding interests. Seems like a missed opportunity sadly.
The background music is quite nice.
Would you mind If I ask where I can get the audio for them?
Sometimes I like listening to background music while I work
It's from all over the place and I don't have a comprehensive list at hand, but if there are any specific pieces you want, let me know and I'll find them.
Wow Thank you!
So the one I'm looking for is the background music on the daily/general activities, when there aren't any event going on
I think this is probably the one you mean?
Yes, this is it!
Thanks, Cosy!
When is the new update?.. i can't wait.. and I don't mind donate some money..
The Patreon release should be on March 3rd.
I fucking love this game. The characters are amazing, the story is fascinating and I cannot wait for the next update. I'm so in love with the design of Lucy, it's exactly my type of girl and I really love her characterization. Looking forward to the next update and hopefully WE can enter new stages with Sarah
Love the game so far looking forward to see wha more you can come up with
My fav character so far is 1. Lucy 2. Victoria 3. Headmistress
In average how long is it between releases? or is it different?
Glad you're enjoying it! I usually put out an update every 2 months.
Very nice game, really like it. Great work.
I really love the models. Just one thing, is it only me, or did anyone else mentioned that the headmistress eyebrows looks a bit strange. I feel like they are too high and in many images it looks like she is missing them, when you look at her face (yes she still has them, but at such a high place that it seems like they are missing). Its a beautifull model, but from the first moment i have seen her, it distracted me :)
One another thing, there is mentioned pregnancy in planed tags. Will it be in a way, that the girls will stop using their pills after discussing it with you? So you can avoid it? I am not really into preggo. Its not a game breaker, but if i can avoid it, i prefer that.
Hey, glad you're enjoying it!
Pregnancy won't be avoidable, but it won't come until very late in the story, at which point it will just make sense for it to become a part of the characters' lives.
What an amazing game! I can't believe this is your first game. How is that possible? I hope you never stop. I actually played the game from the beginning a 2nd time while waiting for updates. I'd usually only do that to selected different choices or routes in games with choices, and I'd skip over most things, but I didn't skip a single part here. It's all just always so intriguing and entertaining. I love so much about the game, so many general aspects I can point out, let alone all the specific scenes which is pretty much every scene.
Just to make it more perfect, I noticed a handful of mistakes in the text. Day 18 in the kitchen at the party, Lily has one line and says something like "I should have know Gilbert would bring you here". Know should be known. The other mistakes were all the same thing with the word "passed". Passed is should only be used as a verb. "Past" is the noun, like a location. I saw it 3 times, first time being after the girls dry off from the rain (day 19), saying they walked "passed" you. Another Catherine looks "passed" you at the girls coming down the steps at the cafe. Last one I saw so far is when Sarah changes out of Akatsuki's cooking uniform and rushes right "passed".
I was also wondering how you manage to come up with so much great stuff. I cackled so many times at the incredible lines, flirty moves, or just incredible moments, like when you compliment Lucy and Hanna for their maid uniforms, but just glance at Victoria without saying anything to tease her. Or the knowing smiles everyone gives Hanna after she comes out of your office after getting spanked. I really appreciate these small details. I also love how much is expressed with the small changes in the head and body positioning and facial expressions.
I thought the scene with Victoria on the bench in the park when it started raining was going to lead to some sex in the rain. I mean, I guess it might not be great for a virgin scene and the issues with pain. But it was quite romantic and beautiful. It could make for yet another special and unique sex scene, as all have been so far. I love how natural and I guess spontaneous (if that's the best way to describe them) the scenes are. I hope it doesn't change. If you run out of ideas, maybe I can brainstorm some ideas to inspire you. Because I can't imagine a human being keeping this up as well as you have. Amazing!
Thank you, that's really amazing feedback! Especially the bit about facial expressions, as that's the most common complaint I get - some people can't read them at all, and think I don't put any effort into it, but I really do! I just prefer a more subtle style instead of the huge, over exaggerated, constantly open mouthed expressions that some other AVNs do.
The past/passed thing is something I always screw up unfortunately, it just doesn't stand out to me as wrong for some reason when I write/proofread, so I really appreciate when people point them out.
As for ideas, mostly it just comes naturally to me I suppose, but I do occasionally get inspiration from people discussing the story and theorycrafting on my discord, so if you want to contribute there you're more than welcome!
Keep up the great work on this beautiful game creator i love it👍
Thanks, I will!
Are there more games like this with a sort of master/slave relationship besides Maids & Maidens?