Just finished my second play through. I really love this game! I can't wait for it to be updated! Some things I hope to see is the story to move to Sarah focused with a huge development in Catherine to tge point where we are almost in a relationship or in one. I hope Elizabeth is developed more. I also want to see Hannah come out of her shell. Im so excited for the next update! Anyone have a guess which women will take the final spots in the Harem? My guess is Elizabeth and Anabelle.
This is a really good game, I'm still in the early stages but the story in this game is really interesting, really looking forward to this game , keep up the good work author
When a game is so good that the h scenes are a bonus more than the goal, you know the story is great. The mc is so easy to put your own shoes on that you end up caring for the girls like they are truly yours and real. I hope cozy cafe 3 (or the rest of this update) is focused on sarah since shes one of the best written girls in any itch game.
absolutely fantastic. loved every second of it. the writing and character development are so well done I find myself genuinely caring for them. I was truly heartbroken when I reached the end of the current update. I sincerely hope you continue updating the game with more story. I think your truly talented and eagerly await the Next update!
unfortunately I wouldn’t doubt it. I just couldn’t put this one down. I’ll keep looking but for now just awaiting the next update. Thanks for the input!
Lessons in love is probably the best written AVN out there, but due to its topic and the fact that its not really a sex game in the classic sense its not for everyone.
Ripples and Thirty days where kinda good written for the average story driven AVN the last time ive checked in and if you can overlock some hard incel-vibes, Twisted Memories has its moments too.
Is there anything specific you're looking for? I think there's a lot of well written ones out there that I could recommend (following 250 devs, I swear I touch grass), but what I think is well written might not be the same for you
There are other well written games. They are just hard to find. I have a list of over 50 that are good, but there is no way to post it here 🙁. This one happens to be the #1 on that list, but there are others that are close to as good. My best suggestion is, go to discord and you will learn a lot more.
Bro, I admire you a lot. The story is so good that at times it takes away the sexual aspect. I hope this lasts a long time and if it ends, I hope you make a part two. Haha, new sub on Patreon.
Recently finished reading and this was an enjoyable story so far. Here are some thoughts on characters so far.
Warning Spoilers below
MC pays a wage every week or so right? having a small reminder of this would show their increased financial independence. MC could help Lucy open her own bank account as well. This might be a surprise for Catherine, as even a contract can't negate the need to pay a minimum wage (at least in a just society). This will give her the opportunity to pay off the debt or double down and commit.
Brian as a villain hasn't really shown much vileness, other than some words. Is he being secretly abusive to mika? but careful to do it in private and in ways that doesn't show? Gives an opportunity for MC to find out and help Lenny to break her away from Brian, maybe they'll eventually get a mildly decent ending together. This will further isolate Brian and make him more dangerous.
Akatsuki's dad is a bit eccentric, and it seems like the families use this against him by reminding him of MC's granddad all the time in order to "keep him in his place". MC doesn't seem to care about secret recipes and just cares about making good food, so eventually they'll get along pretty well and MC could learn a bunch from him.
MC and Akatsuki jointly made a mistake in the kitchen, one might expect him to take some "punishment" as well to be fair and all.
Are the families dangerous to each other in ways more than financial? Should the MC be on the lookout for votes that will destroy the balance of power even if he's voting with one side only?
Where was it suggested there should be choices? It is merely commentary on the story so far and what may happen in the future based on previous events.
Excellent work my friend, I would even recommend you explore Sarah's character a little more since you have a gold mine for content in this and another game separately just with her, cheer up bro
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Just finished my second play through. I really love this game! I can't wait for it to be updated! Some things I hope to see is the story to move to Sarah focused with a huge development in Catherine to tge point where we are almost in a relationship or in one. I hope Elizabeth is developed more. I also want to see Hannah come out of her shell. Im so excited for the next update! Anyone have a guess which women will take the final spots in the Harem? My guess is Elizabeth and Anabelle.
This is a really good game, I'm still in the early stages but the story in this game is really interesting, really looking forward to this game , keep up the good work author
Dude the Story is actually fun to follow and the H scene's feel like a bonus.
can't wait see more of Sarah
When a game is so good that the h scenes are a bonus more than the goal, you know the story is great. The mc is so easy to put your own shoes on that you end up caring for the girls like they are truly yours and real. I hope cozy cafe 3 (or the rest of this update) is focused on sarah since shes one of the best written girls in any itch game.
agree 100%
absolutely fantastic. loved every second of it. the writing and character development are so well done I find myself genuinely caring for them. I was truly heartbroken when I reached the end of the current update. I sincerely hope you continue updating the game with more story. I think your truly talented and eagerly await the Next update!
if anyone has any suggestions for similarly well written games please id love to hear them.
in my opinion there is no so well written novell game atm
unfortunately I wouldn’t doubt it. I just couldn’t put this one down. I’ll keep looking but for now just awaiting the next update. Thanks for the input!
Lessons in love is probably the best written AVN out there, but due to its topic and the fact that its not really a sex game in the classic sense its not for everyone.
Ripples and Thirty days where kinda good written for the average story driven AVN the last time ive checked in and if you can overlock some hard incel-vibes, Twisted Memories has its moments too.
Is there anything specific you're looking for? I think there's a lot of well written ones out there that I could recommend (following 250 devs, I swear I touch grass), but what I think is well written might not be the same for you
Eternum by Caribdis and Companion of Darkness Berkili4 are both fantastically written game.
There are other well written games. They are just hard to find. I have a list of over 50 that are good, but there is no way to post it here 🙁. This one happens to be the #1 on that list, but there are others that are close to as good. My best suggestion is, go to discord and you will learn a lot more.
If u jave them publicly saved on your list for everyone too see they can just look at your profile, thats how i found some of the novels i read...
有中文吗
No official translations are planned until the game is completed.
什么样的比赛
I've tried the whole game and it's really great.
I generally understand the story, but I don't quite understand some conversation.
Will you consider adding a Chinese translation? I really need it to experience the whole story
No official translations are planned until the game is completed.
It's a shame, but it makes sense, so authors can create content faster.
Bro, I admire you a lot. The story is so good that at times it takes away the sexual aspect. I hope this lasts a long time and if it ends, I hope you make a part two. Haha, new sub on Patreon.
Recently finished reading and this was an enjoyable story so far. Here are some thoughts on characters so far.
Warning Spoilers below
MC pays a wage every week or so right? having a small reminder of this would show their increased financial independence. MC could help Lucy open her own bank account as well. This might be a surprise for Catherine, as even a contract can't negate the need to pay a minimum wage (at least in a just society). This will give her the opportunity to pay off the debt or double down and commit.
Brian as a villain hasn't really shown much vileness, other than some words. Is he being secretly abusive to mika? but careful to do it in private and in ways that doesn't show? Gives an opportunity for MC to find out and help Lenny to break her away from Brian, maybe they'll eventually get a mildly decent ending together. This will further isolate Brian and make him more dangerous.
Akatsuki's dad is a bit eccentric, and it seems like the families use this against him by reminding him of MC's granddad all the time in order to "keep him in his place". MC doesn't seem to care about secret recipes and just cares about making good food, so eventually they'll get along pretty well and MC could learn a bunch from him.
MC and Akatsuki jointly made a mistake in the kitchen, one might expect him to take some "punishment" as well to be fair and all.
Are the families dangerous to each other in ways more than financial? Should the MC be on the lookout for votes that will destroy the balance of power even if he's voting with one side only?
Those are all path-choice variables in a story that has none. Just sit back and enjoy the story.
Where was it suggested there should be choices? It is merely commentary on the story so far and what may happen in the future based on previous events.
Excellent work my friend, I would even recommend you explore Sarah's character a little more since you have a gold mine for content in this and another game separately just with her, cheer up bro
im just sitting her waiting for the next update to come out as I really Enjoyed it so far