Bro, I admire you a lot. The story is so good that at times it takes away the sexual aspect. I hope this lasts a long time and if it ends, I hope you make a part two. Haha, new sub on Patreon.
Recently finished reading and this was an enjoyable story so far. Here are some thoughts on characters so far.
Warning Spoilers below
MC pays a wage every week or so right? having a small reminder of this would show their increased financial independence. MC could help Lucy open her own bank account as well. This might be a surprise for Catherine, as even a contract can't negate the need to pay a minimum wage (at least in a just society). This will give her the opportunity to pay off the debt or double down and commit.
Brian as a villain hasn't really shown much vileness, other than some words. Is he being secretly abusive to mika? but careful to do it in private and in ways that doesn't show? Gives an opportunity for MC to find out and help Lenny to break her away from Brian, maybe they'll eventually get a mildly decent ending together. This will further isolate Brian and make him more dangerous.
Akatsuki's dad is a bit eccentric, and it seems like the families use this against him by reminding him of MC's granddad all the time in order to "keep him in his place". MC doesn't seem to care about secret recipes and just cares about making good food, so eventually they'll get along pretty well and MC could learn a bunch from him.
MC and Akatsuki jointly made a mistake in the kitchen, one might expect him to take some "punishment" as well to be fair and all.
Are the families dangerous to each other in ways more than financial? Should the MC be on the lookout for votes that will destroy the balance of power even if he's voting with one side only?
Excellent work my friend, I would even recommend you explore Sarah's character a little more since you have a gold mine for content in this and another game separately just with her, cheer up bro
would give a 10/10 without the toy stuff . other than kitty tail it really just feels weird … I get what type of game it is but it feels really forced and unnecessary.
tying up and stuff feels normal but i like this game because its not just the usually "stick everything you can in each of their holes while they fuck each other" . It feels extremely intimate compared to other stories and a few h scenes were completely ruined for me because of this.
the story and characters are more than enough to give the scenes weight to be ruined with the extra porno fluff if anything is just sad when so many moments are so well crafted.
at least just involve some choice that will allow me see scenes without it so i can still actually enjoy them and not just get annoyed an intimate moment was ruined.
Yeah, that's probably why, unfortunately! Last time I tried, the system decided I was a bot and banned me. Took the game page down and everything - took me 2 weeks to get it all fixed.
I think they should just disable links for everyone. If its too difficult to make an exception for a creator in a creator's comment section, just don't let anyone link anything.
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有中文吗
No official translations are planned until the game is completed.
什么样的比赛
I've tried the whole game and it's really great.
I generally understand the story, but I don't quite understand some conversation.
Will you consider adding a Chinese translation? I really need it to experience the whole story
No official translations are planned until the game is completed.
It's a shame, but it makes sense, so authors can create content faster.
Bro, I admire you a lot. The story is so good that at times it takes away the sexual aspect. I hope this lasts a long time and if it ends, I hope you make a part two. Haha, new sub on Patreon.
Recently finished reading and this was an enjoyable story so far. Here are some thoughts on characters so far.
Warning Spoilers below
MC pays a wage every week or so right? having a small reminder of this would show their increased financial independence. MC could help Lucy open her own bank account as well. This might be a surprise for Catherine, as even a contract can't negate the need to pay a minimum wage (at least in a just society). This will give her the opportunity to pay off the debt or double down and commit.
Brian as a villain hasn't really shown much vileness, other than some words. Is he being secretly abusive to mika? but careful to do it in private and in ways that doesn't show? Gives an opportunity for MC to find out and help Lenny to break her away from Brian, maybe they'll eventually get a mildly decent ending together. This will further isolate Brian and make him more dangerous.
Akatsuki's dad is a bit eccentric, and it seems like the families use this against him by reminding him of MC's granddad all the time in order to "keep him in his place". MC doesn't seem to care about secret recipes and just cares about making good food, so eventually they'll get along pretty well and MC could learn a bunch from him.
MC and Akatsuki jointly made a mistake in the kitchen, one might expect him to take some "punishment" as well to be fair and all.
Are the families dangerous to each other in ways more than financial? Should the MC be on the lookout for votes that will destroy the balance of power even if he's voting with one side only?
Excellent work my friend, I would even recommend you explore Sarah's character a little more since you have a gold mine for content in this and another game separately just with her, cheer up bro
im just sitting her waiting for the next update to come out as I really Enjoyed it so far
would give a 10/10 without the toy stuff . other than kitty tail it really just feels weird … I get what type of game it is but it feels really forced and unnecessary.
tying up and stuff feels normal but i like this game because its not just the usually "stick everything you can in each of their holes while they fuck each other" . It feels extremely intimate compared to other stories and a few h scenes were completely ruined for me because of this.
the story and characters are more than enough to give the scenes weight to be ruined with the extra porno fluff if anything is just sad when so many moments are so well crafted.
at least just involve some choice that will allow me see scenes without it so i can still actually enjoy them and not just get annoyed an intimate moment was ruined.
Is there pregnancy content planned for the future?
It will come up very late in the story, and it won't be fetishised, rather it will be more of a story element.
No official translations are planned until the game is completed.
what is the update status on the next update?
Cosy Creator indicated they are trying for a early November for the public release.
What are the names of the songs that are used? I cant find any when searching in youtube 🥲
I can't post links here, but if you join the game's discord server, a track list is pinned in the main channel
Ah thank you, but discord is a pain in the ass to me 😂 everytime i download and delete it after doing some messages add 15 other groups.
I guess its time to get it back again 🥵
It's so dumb that you can't post links in your own comment section. Yet there are bots that can do it everywhere. Smh
Yeah, that's probably why, unfortunately! Last time I tried, the system decided I was a bot and banned me. Took the game page down and everything - took me 2 weeks to get it all fixed.
I think they should just disable links for everyone. If its too difficult to make an exception for a creator in a creator's comment section, just don't let anyone link anything.